Barb Dalton
Sep 16, 2023

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With this one, I'm enraptured with how the poem looks as well as the words. I love how each line gets longer; you've created a persona with your word structure..

Or - I'm bonkers!!

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Barb Dalton
Barb Dalton

Written by Barb Dalton

Mum to 3 humans; Cat lover. A Kiwi-Canuck. Nursing Instructor by day; rants and reminisces by night. Owner of Nursing Notes and a proud Booster of A+ stories

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